how can I make this more poetic

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(Hey is that a new Xion? Wow, there aren't many of those here.
Anyways, she's just staring right now because this. isn't the World That Never Was)

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[orchidenchanted.livejournal.com]

['sup Xion. Namine is just walking on by~]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(--hey she kind of knows you. a little.)

Namine?

[orchidenchanted.livejournal.com]

[Right, a little.]

Xion?

[Turns towards her but, oh, no smelly scent. you aren't from her world :\]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(wait why do you smell like flowers, Namine what)

This isn't the World That Never Was...right?

[orchidenchanted.livejournal.com]

[Gives her a small smile and shakes her head.]

No, sorry.... welcome to the dressing room.

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

The dressing room?

[orchidenchanted.livejournal.com]

It's a crossroads of dimensions. There's doubles of everyone you know from all different universes, times, etc. Like me- I'm not the Namine from your world.

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

Is there a way out?

(thinks this actually sounds pretty cool /what)

[orchidenchanted.livejournal.com]

No, but everything you need is free. The kitchen restocks itself, there's a few rooms filled with all types of clothes, and there's empty bedrooms up for the taking.

[fieriest.livejournal.com]

[ Well, well, if it isn't a you. He'll just stealth around and that. ]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(totally hasn't noticed him yet, and--hey what where'd the door go)

[fieriest.livejournal.com]

[ uh oh. ]

Should've figured you'd be new around here.

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(wait what)

...so this isn't the World That Never Was?

[fieriest.livejournal.com]

[ poor girl, you're in for a lot of 'heart'ache. he pushes his back off of the wall and shrugs. ]

Afraid not. Welcome to .. the nexus.

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(totally believes him um)

Is there a way out?

[fieriest.livejournal.com]

[ tsk, tsk. >: ]

For most people here, no.

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(she's young and foolish /what)

So...what's the exception?

[fieriest.livejournal.com]

There isn't any rhyme or reason. People come and people go -- never by choice.

[ a lot like that other place he haunts orz. ]

[femmyx.livejournal.com]

['sup, Demyx with boobs will be glancing up and down. you have boobs, so you're not 'her' Xion.]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(...wait what)

IX?

[femmyx.livejournal.com]

[waves, smiling.]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

Why are you...?

(so brainbroken djfk)

[femmyx.livejournal.com]

I probably could ask the same about you.

[greypetals.livejournal.com]

[a soccer ball bounces right past her.]

[memoryproblems.livejournal.com]

(brb trying to figure out where she is sdfsd)

[greypetals.livejournal.com]

[well this little Riku that's running after the ball could maybe explain to you.]