http://devilsman.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] devilsman.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kingdomdressing 2010-06-13 04:39 am (UTC)

typos, honestly.

[ The sniper did not like that, but that's when several more came in to make sure Naminé didn't escape.

Now, considering Ventus was distracted, Xigbar manipulated the gravity of the situation.

Ever felt like being crushed into a tin can? Because he made sure not to do it slowly, instead motioning his fist down towards the ground to make gravity attempt to crush him. Of not crush, force him down on his knees along with a massive headache.

Broken bones may happen now or later. He needed a toothpick, after all.
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